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Post by eowwyns on Jun 1, 2014 15:16:56 GMT -5
I've never written a Thramsay fic before, or any GoT fan fiction for that matter, so I'd appreciate some feedback to help me with the characterisation etc. here it is
I'm not all that pleased with it. I feel like I've reused some words too often and idk. Still, it's only a first attempt. |
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Post by tender-vittles on Jun 1, 2014 15:44:58 GMT -5
Omg, I really enjoyed that!! I hope you write more, great job!! I just recently started writing/posting my own fanfics and even if you're not always happy with the results, keep at it and you will definitely get more confident!
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Post by metalbutter on Jun 2, 2014 3:19:56 GMT -5
this is really, really good. do you have an ao3 account or are you still on the waiting list? this must be posted on ao3, i beg of you ;n;
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Post by eowwyns on Jun 3, 2014 14:35:27 GMT -5
Thank you both! I've just got an ao3 account, I'll post the story on there now  |
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Post by eowwyns on Jun 3, 2014 14:43:57 GMT -5
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Post by tender-vittles on Jun 3, 2014 20:31:41 GMT -5
Ahhhh yes, now I can bookmark it for future reference!
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Post by eowwyns on Jun 6, 2014 16:39:41 GMT -5
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Post by tender-vittles on Jun 8, 2014 11:18:23 GMT -5
I'm so enjoying this!!!
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Post by eowwyns on Jun 11, 2014 12:43:19 GMT -5
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Post by malreve on Jul 17, 2014 11:05:44 GMT -5
eowwyns, I had already read this on AO3 before but it was so good that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it a second time through. You are too hard on yourself; you are a wonderful writer and I feel that you have an excellent grasp of both characters. And the smut, while short, was well written and strangely *emotionally* satisfying because it wasn't JUST smut, it had the love expressed well enough that the act of intimacy became *meaningful* and therefore more enjoyable to observe. Emotions are the center of all relationships, even the twisted ones like we see between Ramsay and Reek, so it only makes sense that the way you portrayed Reek's desperate need for Ramsay's approval and attention would make the physical aspect of their relationship that much better.
I don't know if I left a review on AO3, although I did give kudos. My review is here, but if you want me to put it in the reviews on AO3 I can do that as well.
I hope to see more work like this from you soon, you do have a talent for it. XD
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Post by eowwyns on Jul 20, 2014 15:26:15 GMT -5
eowwyns, I had already read this on AO3 before but it was so good that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it a second time through. You are too hard on yourself; you are a wonderful writer and I feel that you have an excellent grasp of both characters. And the smut, while short, was well written and strangely *emotionally* satisfying because it wasn't JUST smut, it had the love expressed well enough that the act of intimacy became *meaningful* and therefore more enjoyable to observe. Emotions are the center of all relationships, even the twisted ones like we see between Ramsay and Reek, so it only makes sense that the way you portrayed Reek's desperate need for Ramsay's approval and attention would make the physical aspect of their relationship that much better. I don't know if I left a review on AO3, although I did give kudos. My review is here, but if you want me to put it in the reviews on AO3 I can do that as well. I hope to see more work like this from you soon, you do have a talent for it. XD Thank you so much! You are so sweet, I'm glad you liked my fic  |
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Post by malreve on Jul 20, 2014 20:41:16 GMT -5
eowwyns, I had already read this on AO3 before but it was so good that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it a second time through. You are too hard on yourself; you are a wonderful writer and I feel that you have an excellent grasp of both characters. And the smut, while short, was well written and strangely *emotionally* satisfying because it wasn't JUST smut, it had the love expressed well enough that the act of intimacy became *meaningful* and therefore more enjoyable to observe. Emotions are the center of all relationships, even the twisted ones like we see between Ramsay and Reek, so it only makes sense that the way you portrayed Reek's desperate need for Ramsay's approval and attention would make the physical aspect of their relationship that much better. I don't know if I left a review on AO3, although I did give kudos. My review is here, but if you want me to put it in the reviews on AO3 I can do that as well. I hope to see more work like this from you soon, you do have a talent for it. XD Thank you so much! You are so sweet, I'm glad you liked my fic The pleasure was all mine. You are a darling, I hope that you continue to receive positive feedback for your work as it is well deserved. |
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